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Fluctuation (Free verse) by hatedestruction
Open, empty space, brighter than bright
Blink of an eye changes everything but light
Boredom overwhelms, time loses track
Somewhere, something must come back
Clock ticks, tock never follows
Slower than lightning, but not as hollow
Lost inside, yet feel no doubts
Whether It burns or chills here now
Nothing to do, Nothing to say
Everything brings the same, stale day
Want to come in? It gives a shout
Whether you burn or chill with me now
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Arithmetic Mean: 1.5
Weighted score: 4.8340096
Overall Rank: 10750
Posted: November 8, 2004 11:08 AM PST; Last modified: November 8, 2004 11:09 AM PST
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