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ishte ishta (Other) by IcHronit
i wanna claim this fame my only burden to name this pittiful minds wasted and lost in this dime ishte ishta my love where are you my heart is running down and two love is quenching into this warm empire I can't see place is bitter ishte ishta please come back to me i LOVE you so much to be the man iam in this world is this poem great or what? tell me something ishte are you lovely like the way I saw you before the you were right the end my love ishte ishta marry me now or forever hold your peace this poem is great my love so accept it or die in shame i love you though so please be not hasty and judge me wrong now the end ishte ishta..

Up the ladder: Tangled web.
Down the ladder: The Ganing Pyre

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.3333333
Weighted score: 4.8013287
Overall Rank: 11117
Posted: November 4, 2004 2:07 PM PST; Last modified: November 4, 2004 2:12 PM PST
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[0] edpeterson @ | 5-Nov-04/9:14 AM | Reply
you should try to work some AIDS into the poem. That would really give that extry cutting edge.
[n/a] IcHronit @ > edpeterson | 15-Nov-04/12:40 PM | Reply
what an idiot you are. this shit means nothing.
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