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Shadow (Free verse) by TLRufener
Someone creeps near stepping lightly
Making no sound but the beat of their heart
Slowly drawing closer in the shadows
Hidden by what they believe is whole
Alone once again and being followed once more
I hide on them to seek their identity
Gracefully watching from the darkness
Waiting for their steps to carry them past
Hearing the beating growing louder and faster
They know I am ready to pounce
Gentle breeze dances through the shadows
I hear them coming closer still
I am perched and ready to attack
Creeping slowly for a better angle
Holding my breath as they come into view
Pressing down the leaves to see clearly
Springing out of the shadows
Alone just as before with my shadow
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 8078
Posted: November 1, 2004 5:57 PM PST; Last modified: November 1, 2004 5:57 PM PST
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