poemranker ::Rollercoaster by kalikopeli

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Free verse № 114404

Rollercoaster

Member since 2003 · Posted 27 Oct 2004 · 0 comments

Love is a rollercoaster, it goes up and down. You're making lots of noise, only I dont hear a sound. Talk about the love and relations and the lack there of, erotic sex is all that I've been dreaming of. I'm amazed at the spells that your lips cast, but what they're saying, I dont understand, they're moving too fast. Take me in my dreams Wake me from my fears I yearn to be your need Your body, I want to feed I'll wait here on my knees Til' you wake me from my dreams I feel your love is gonna burn me, yet I yearn for your sweet seed. The love we made is gonna haunt me, yet your love makes me free. So if I dreaming, don't wake me, cause the love you give won't ache me, So just take me.....

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