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Rollercoaster (Free verse) by kalikopeli
Love is a rollercoaster, it goes up and down. You're making lots of noise, only I dont hear a sound. Talk about the love and relations and the lack there of, erotic sex is all that I've been dreaming of. I'm amazed at the spells that your lips cast, but what they're saying, I dont understand, they're moving too fast. Take me in my dreams Wake me from my fears I yearn to be your need Your body, I want to feed I'll wait here on my knees Til' you wake me from my dreams I feel your love is gonna burn me, yet I yearn for your sweet seed. The love we made is gonna haunt me, yet your love makes me free. So if I dreaming, don't wake me, cause the love you give won't ache me, So just take me.....

Up the ladder: the band
Down the ladder: Fasting river of Amen

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.0
Weighted score: 4.8577223
Overall Rank: 10353
Posted: October 27, 2004 4:50 PM PDT; Last modified: October 27, 2004 4:50 PM PDT
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