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Always (Other) by anonymoussong
One moment warm, The next one dead. Talking, crying, laughing, blanking. An evening out, An insane movie, Singing, hugging, giggling, hiding. The moments spent, In pure comfort, Sitting, sleeping, holding, running. Always one little thing, which makes me want to scream. Always one little thing, which distances him from me. Always one little thing, which my heart knows cannot be cured. Always.

Up the ladder: Myself
Down the ladder: A Question

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.9205313
Overall Rank: 9489
Posted: October 21, 2004 5:30 PM PDT; Last modified: October 21, 2004 5:30 PM PDT
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