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Weeping Willow (Free verse) by longships
Weeping Willow Crying Summer madness Dew on my leaves Glistening Waning wonder Pale green solitude Rustling windswept Shapes in shadow Darkness falls Nestling birds Hidden in branches Screams of anguish Axe blade cuts Scarred bark Bleeding trunk Withering roots Quiet sorrow Fading spirit Falling Water ripples No pain No love Only peace Mysterious sensation Floating Earthbound no longer I am alive in my death

Down the ladder: I walk with no road

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.3333333
Weighted score: 4.8013287
Overall Rank: 11115
Posted: October 3, 2004 1:38 PM PDT; Last modified: October 3, 2004 1:38 PM PDT
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