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Weeping Willow (Free verse) by longships
Weeping Willow
Crying
Summer madness
Dew on my leaves
Glistening
Waning wonder
Pale green solitude
Rustling windswept
Shapes in shadow
Darkness falls
Nestling birds
Hidden in branches
Screams of anguish
Axe blade cuts
Scarred bark
Bleeding trunk
Withering roots
Quiet sorrow
Fading spirit
Falling
Water ripples
No pain
No love
Only peace
Mysterious sensation
Floating
Earthbound no longer
I am alive in my death
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Weighted score: 4.8013287
Overall Rank: 11115
Posted: October 3, 2004 1:38 PM PDT; Last modified: October 3, 2004 1:38 PM PDT
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