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Weeping Willow

Member since 2002 · Posted 3 Oct 2004 · 0 comments

Weeping Willow Crying Summer madness Dew on my leaves Glistening Waning wonder Pale green solitude Rustling windswept Shapes in shadow Darkness falls Nestling birds Hidden in branches Screams of anguish Axe blade cuts Scarred bark Bleeding trunk Withering roots Quiet sorrow Fading spirit Falling Water ripples No pain No love Only peace Mysterious sensation Floating Earthbound no longer I am alive in my death

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