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Goodbye (Free verse) by TLRufener
Tears drip for reasons unknown Wondering why I am here alone A cold wind blows once again As I bid farewell to my only friend How could we have known it would end like this I never got to give you our final kiss There was no way of knowing that we would be done So soon after we had just begun I never would have believed if I had not known That I would return to my house so alone Sitting in the garden as we used to do All my thoughts are my memories of you My tears fall faster than summer rain Someway I will try to overcome this pain Forever my life will repeat this day Forever I will remember you were taken away One single truth that I will always know Never will I be ready to let you go For the rest of my life I will only cry Because I was not there to say goodbye

Up the ladder: Castle in the Clouds
Down the ladder: Hollywood Blue

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.9205313
Overall Rank: 9505
Posted: September 26, 2004 7:55 AM PDT; Last modified: September 26, 2004 7:55 AM PDT
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[6] Shardik @ 24.130.62.63 | 26-Sep-04/6:32 PM | Reply
Perhaps they drip because of GRAVITY?
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