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Childhood memory (Free verse) by Sasha
There is an ancient wind that haunts this tree.
It doodles curly-cues of leaves and such
along the asphalt ground
which found
it there when it had yet to be
hardened to touch...
There was a lap of foliage in this tree
that watched the apples grow
and let them go as soon as she
thought they were ready to be loosed below.
Thereâs also me. And I have climbed this tree
to see what sort of wind
it was that thinned
the green from branches bare now as can be,
and hardened tar
on pint-sized pebbles where my dadâs parked car
has been for long.
But all I learned
was that the wind was strong
and made it cold enough so that I turned
back earthward down the tree
and left where wind did not want me to be.
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Arithmetic Mean: 8.625
Weighted score: 5.9749126
Overall Rank: 1335
Posted: September 26, 2004 6:00 AM PDT; Last modified: September 26, 2004 9:18 AM PDT
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