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Burning Night (Free verse) by ifni midnight light
the color of a dirty sunset
and it ends,
the pain
of
being only halfway there.
it's do or die,
jump or lie,
and I went.
Terrifying freedom,
this burning night
and I wept.
Up the ladder:
on my hog
Down the ladder:
Z.
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Posted: March 16, 2002 1:14 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:14 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.8997293 Overall Rank: 9867 Comments:
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16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
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halfway there to the night, or ... ? :) very pretty but I didn't get a "click" out of it.
beautifully stark...
This is a very good piece. It really is fantastic. *8*
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