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Free verse № 113

Burning Night

by ifni

Member since 2001 · Posted 16 Mar 2002 · 3 comments

midnight light the color of a dirty sunset and it ends, the pain of being only halfway there. it's do or die, jump or lie, and I went. Terrifying freedom, this burning night and I wept.

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[n/a] nentwined 16-Mar-02/1:21 AM Reply
halfway there to the night, or ... ? :) very pretty but I didn't get a "click" out of it.
[7] anonymous 10-Sep-01/4:04 AM Reply
beautifully stark...
[8] AngelicVampiress 22-Jan-06/11:08 AM Reply
This is a very good piece. It really is fantastic. *8*