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Burning Night
(
Free verse
) by
ifni
midnight light the color of a dirty sunset and it ends, the pain of being only halfway there. it's do or die, jump or lie, and I went. Terrifying freedom, this burning night and I wept.
nentwined
16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
halfway there to the night, or ... ? :) very pretty but I didn't get a "click" out of it.
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