poemranker ::Pandemonium by Twisted Wizard

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Free verse № 1128

Pandemonium

Member since 2002 · Posted 30 Apr 2002 · 1 comment

Everywhere you go, widespread chaos is there, Ripping and tearing time and souls apart. Left concealed in an eternity of torture, The destruction begins. Above the sky falls, and below the oceans rise, Only to collide with this force of hatred which has infested civilization. Screaming and crying, hoping and dying, Darkness has overcome what was once so true. This disease takes another life away, Then its death cycle begins again. Take a look around, a look near and far, Nothing can be done for the suffering. Death is in the air, carried with the wind, One by one the slaughtering begins. Total annihilation, followed by deep silence, Pandemonium has taken its final toll. The cries for help are heard no more, For they are lost in time evermore.

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[10] Kraven_The_Wanderer 20-May-09/9:02 AM Reply
this is well written