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mirror mirror (Free verse) by singinkygal
Who's reflection is this the only similarity I can distinguish are the eyes staring back at me who is this person the one they call you and I call me she reaches out to touch the glass as I do in disbelief then pulls away looks away everything is the same except for the inside in that world she no longer lives when I walk away but in my world I stay caught up trying to please but still always having someone's displeasing eyes upon me the worry, the shame, the pain she is the lucky one in her world

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10142
Posted: September 18, 2004 1:28 PM PDT; Last modified: September 18, 2004 1:28 PM PDT
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