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mirror mirror (Free verse) by singinkygal
Who's reflection is this
the only similarity I can distinguish
are the eyes staring back at me
who is this person
the one they call you
and I call me
she reaches out to touch the glass as I do
in disbelief
then pulls away looks away
everything is the same
except for the inside
in that world she no longer lives when I walk away
but in my world I stay
caught up trying to please but still
always having someone's displeasing eyes upon me
the worry, the shame, the pain
she is the lucky one
in her world
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10142
Posted: September 18, 2004 1:28 PM PDT; Last modified: September 18, 2004 1:28 PM PDT
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