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It was Pity killed God-Nietzsche (Free verse) by vulcan
1(Voices in Paradise)
We live in a land of ever-blooming flow'rs
Where trees bear no forbidden fruits.
Where Angels love us and we love them too,
Where we do nothing but eat and woo.
2
God is here
Like anywhere else
Like when we lived and like when we died.
He still gazes on us
With that Paternal Pity of His
Which made Him kill us
To show us some Better Place.
3
In this all-charming countryside
Is still a tree charming than all;
We asked God"what fruit bear the tree?"
He dully replied"Nothing Especial!"
"These Not-especial trees will be death of Him!"we thought;
He heard our reproach yet heeded not.
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We stretched our hands to pluck the fruit
What could it make of us?a batman or a brute?!
Indifferent both seemed to us
We ate it for there it was!
5
We then looked around apple-plucked,
A trumpet sang, the mystery unlocked.
An angel stood in the middle of a void
Abounding;Something Was Not.
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A hollow pitiful voice was stealing over
the trees and the ever-blooming flow'rs
Over the cherubium's wings,over the drooling men's bow'rs
The angel in the void spoke
The pitiful note unceased,
God had cried alot
Before He on His sword unassisted fall.
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Posted: August 25, 2002 4:34 AM PDT; Last modified: August 25, 2002 4:34 AM PDT
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