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Cruel Twist (Free verse) by ifni treasured glance
treasured chance
don't snatch my dreams away
so
casually,
with a turn of your head
and that cruel twist
of your lips-
so inevitable
expectable
predictable
so gently malicious
so
sweetly vicious
what else could you do?
everything I know of love
I
learned
from the cruel twist
of your lips.
2/20/99 J. Vancil
Up the ladder:
Mean Matt was so mean, when a homeless guy asked him for change he gave him a -blank-
Down the ladder:
Reflection Upon Looking in Roget's Thesaurus, Copyright 1941
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Posted: March 16, 2002 1:14 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:14 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.9481883 Overall Rank: 8991 Comments:
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last line rings so false to me.
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