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Cruel Twist (Free verse) by ifni
treasured glance treasured chance don't snatch my dreams away so casually, with a turn of your head and that cruel twist of your lips- so inevitable expectable predictable so gently malicious so sweetly vicious what else could you do? everything I know of love I learned from the cruel twist of your lips. 2/20/99 J. Vancil


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Arithmetic Mean: 4.9411764
Weighted score: 4.9481883
Overall Rank: 8986
Posted: March 16, 2002 1:14 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:14 AM PST
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[n/a] deleted user @ | 16-Mar-02/1:21 AM | Reply
last line rings so false to me.
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