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Cruel Twist (Free verse) by ifni

treasured glance treasured chance don't snatch my dreams away so casually, with a turn of your head and that cruel twist of your lips- so inevitable expectable predictable so gently malicious so sweetly vicious what else could you do? everything I know of love I learned from the cruel twist of your lips. 2/20/99 J. Vancil

aduren 16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
last line rings so false to me.




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