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Crushin (Free verse) by Sirens_Voice
In one moment I was taken away. In that one second all I felt was your gaze. I only feel my heart beating with every pounding sound. Only hear your voice calling when your around. Crazy how I don't know you not as well as I should. But already you got me. I'm under your spell. Once you step into my life all these emotions seem so real. It's too late to turn back now too late to stop this ride. For now I'm crushin on you and all I want is to be by your side

Up the ladder: Putney at Low Tide
Down the ladder: Legends never die

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Arithmetic Mean: 8.571428
Weighted score: 5.960505
Overall Rank: 1349
Posted: August 30, 2004 4:06 PM PDT; Last modified: August 30, 2004 4:06 PM PDT
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