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Where Did You Go? (Free verse) by TAMARAG67
So you never returned, did you Joe? Makes me wonder what your eyes saw last Was there a moment of clarity? Did you close your eyes into nothingness? Or perhaps open them upon infinity I did'nt know you Were you even acquainted with me? Sometimes I am angry with you Like you had some control in the matter How dare you leave! You got off too easy Like Vietnam was some excuse American Hero and all- What about me daddy What about your little girl? God Bless America

Up the ladder: Fair Dianne
Down the ladder: Stuck

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.134471
Overall Rank: 5577
Posted: August 29, 2004 7:02 PM PDT; Last modified: August 29, 2004 7:02 PM PDT
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