poemranker ::Where Did You Go? by TAMARAG67

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Where Did You Go?

Member since 2004 · Posted 29 Aug 2004 · 0 comments

So you never returned, did you Joe? Makes me wonder what your eyes saw last Was there a moment of clarity? Did you close your eyes into nothingness? Or perhaps open them upon infinity I did'nt know you Were you even acquainted with me? Sometimes I am angry with you Like you had some control in the matter How dare you leave! You got off too easy Like Vietnam was some excuse American Hero and all- What about me daddy What about your little girl? God Bless America

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