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Free verse № 111000

Abuse

Member since 2004 · Posted 25 Aug 2004 · 1 comment

I'm trapped inside your charm Hovering in the sensation You say you love me And I think I love you too But bruises don't show love They show mixed emotions You say it's all my fault That I was the one who Made-You-Do-It And for a moment I almost believe you But when I step off the stage I see you're only acting And the strength to walk away Comes from within So turning my back on you I'm free from your constraints I'll never turn around Or even glance back 'Cause as of this day I am moving forward While you're still trapped Left behind

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[8] Brandy_n_Cali 27-Aug-04/6:50 AM Reply
I REALLY ENJOY THIS POEM!!