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Let Go (Free verse) by New Life Drug
im looking around for something safe and warm something to hold on to because I want to run away right now from everything I know could you cry a little more for me? just to make it even but loss of dignity controls us all on nights like these you find yourself more than anyone else dont give up on your words the ones you want to say but a memory comes back and destroys the future like skipping chapters I move ahead in my dreams and its what I live for the knife runs cold and hard and dull cuts like these are never sharp or clean but it makes us who we are whatever way we choose to go I wont forget how you let go

Up the ladder: MY HEART REMEMBERS
Down the ladder: Lust, and the Sad Soul

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.6666667
Weighted score: 4.72186
Overall Rank: 11926
Posted: August 23, 2004 6:07 PM PDT; Last modified: August 23, 2004 6:07 PM PDT
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[3] leonxic @ 80.205.204.54 | 24-Aug-04/10:35 AM | Reply
You should save up money to buy a keyboard with a shift button. 3.
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