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Let Go (Free verse) by New Life Drug
im looking around for something safe and warm
something to hold on to
because I want to run away right now
from everything I know
could you cry a little more for me?
just to make it even
but loss of dignity controls us all
on nights like these you find yourself
more than anyone else
dont give up on your words
the ones you want to say
but a memory comes back and destroys the future
like skipping chapters I move ahead in my dreams
and its what I live for
the knife runs cold and hard and dull
cuts like these are never sharp or clean
but it makes us who we are
whatever way we choose to go
I wont forget how you let go
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.6666667
Weighted score: 4.72186
Overall Rank: 11929
Posted: August 23, 2004 6:07 PM PDT; Last modified: August 23, 2004 6:07 PM PDT
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