Poemranker [Poem: Two Mirrors] [by Dovina] Thu Nov 21 21:17:39 PST 2024

You and I face each other reflecting our splendid isolations cages with a common door familiar smells pitbulls and poets tired of living hearts grown old. We donât talk much allusions metaphors food for exhausted hearts. Itâs as personal as I can be about the way I see it is with you and hope to see you pleased once more with words of mine.

[9] unknown^user @ 68.107.136.25 | 9-Aug-04/7:23 PM | Reply

Bitter resignment. I only take slight issue with the isolation/cages metaphor. It's a little too overused.
Thought about starting a new stanza at "familiar smells"?

[8] zodiac @ 217.144.7.195 | 15-Nov-05/2:14 AM | Reply

I just realized: Two mirrors exactly facing each other don't reflect anything.

[n/a] ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159 > zodiac | 15-Nov-05/4:46 AM | Reply

Only if there's nothing to reflect. It actually causes a virtual infinate reflection.

[8] zodiac @ 217.144.7.195 > ALChemy | 15-Nov-05/9:33 AM | Reply

I assumed that was the case. We're talking about laboratory/poetry conditions. Realistically, you'd see the frames of the mirrors diminishing to a point.

[n/a] Dovina @ 69.175.32.104 > zodiac | 15-Nov-05/10:28 AM | Reply

Realistically, I see my image reflected in his face.

[8] zodiac @ 217.144.7.195 > Dovina | 15-Nov-05/10:44 AM | Reply

That's metaphorically. Realistically, you're a mirror.