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nuevo progreso (Free verse) by unknown^user
curses slip from the mouths of old ladies
driving slowly down crowded streets, in your town
making circles around, little breaths
from children sleeping under crescent moons
they resonate against flashing yellow lights
half in the cold air, empty in a jar-shaped can
without this I can, I will
these children, breathing deeply, sighs
my children, our children, in your town
but it is my business, imprints
of little teeth on the back of my hand
in the woods where the city is raped
and at the end of a small road, in my town
chalk a circle, build memories for everyone
and then stack them up to the sky
in the polo field by the freeway
and at the end of that same small road, towns
lights strewn across a landscape, horizons
stacked until the world loses its meaning
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.2
Weighted score: 5.1430435
Overall Rank: 5419
Posted: August 5, 2004 4:45 PM PDT; Last modified: August 5, 2004 4:45 PM PDT
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