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Found (Free verse) by QuirkyWonder
The eve of innocence Upon your face The weight of the world Falling on your back Lost in the shadows Behind the curtain You're stuck in a box With no sides to hold you in Pushing and pulling Magnetized in one place The city lights behind you The night sky ahead You don't know where you are But for once you don't feel lost

Up the ladder: Sleepless Nights
Down the ladder: Fallen Charub

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.25
Weighted score: 5.2682066
Overall Rank: 3919
Posted: July 19, 2004 4:25 PM PDT; Last modified: July 19, 2004 4:25 PM PDT
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