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It's all over now that you're writing so (Free verse) by fevriere Your chance has been our time
has been had.
Don't waste the papers writing poems;
you take the stamp and lick it and
stick it to me
(you always had the wrong priorities).
Label it as an undecipherable metaphor;
lean your principles on pleas
-
just don't
waste the
paper
or
the ink
on me.
Up the ladder:
Best Boy
Down the ladder:
I want my money back...
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Posted: July 18, 2004 1:53 PM PDT; Last modified: July 18, 2004 1:53 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.119203 Overall Rank: 5807 Comments:
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Dan garcia-Black @ 66.159.232.247
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19-Jul-04/9:00 AM
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Could use some paring
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fevriere @ 62.254.128.6
> Dan garcia-Black
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20-Jul-04/12:38 AM
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Like rhyming couplets? I thought paring was some kind of culinary term.
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