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The lost perfume of my yellow-rose-Girl (Free verse) by Prince of Void
The Perfume of your sweet yellow rose Makes me feel you are still here Makes me the Muse in world of myth Makes my heart beat for the inner beauty However you are so far away from home But sun rise and tear the curtain of night And my tears overflow and overflow from the dream The dream of the girl purifies my soul, my sense Since then she has concealed herself in my existence , my dreams my heart I found myself so mad like a butterfly On land the ocean has dried Ocean of sand empties the place Of yellow roses where I was madly in love Now just dune rises and waves through the way The way I melancholy took my heart in my hands For the moment she will come back Return to the ocean of yellow leaves To the castle above the clouds of high mounts To green grass field and the breeze of peace To the childhood never fades To the season of love …has filled my mind I call you to be within me So land on my tears …hold me tightly in your arms … So then I could seize the lost perfume of yellow- rose-girl so when I open my eyes into another side

Up the ladder: It's a Mammal, Stupid!
Down the ladder: A friend told me

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.134471
Overall Rank: 5594
Posted: July 5, 2004 3:42 PM PDT; Last modified: July 5, 2004 3:42 PM PDT
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[n/a] Shardik @ 24.130.62.63 | 5-Jul-04/9:11 PM | Reply
A freckled gnewt on Pcp.
[7] edpeterson @ 68.79.1.86 | 6-Jul-04/6:47 AM | Reply
an attenuated strip of cheese graffiti on the side of an ass dumpster
[0] god'swife @ 4.231.163.56 | 6-Jul-04/7:45 PM | Reply
A dead, bloated cow lying in a meadow, high summer.
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