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Anger and the liver (Free verse) by shazpen
i`m a bag of tainted meat-contaminated during processing open the vacuum drain fresh air and bacteria swarm deer jagged off target-fluids leak-the meats soured i`m going to catch them and breed them until theyre green now is when the ground takes you back still seedlings sleeping in the ground flies wings shells feathers-thanks for flying pan spermia-it`s never too far for us youre strapped to the bottom of a satellite and really looking down-now skipped beats too much interrupted rythm break freak the rhyme the tidal bulge in the scenery how this awful black drink fortifies--we`ve seperated from the continent rooting in an older world drinking oxidized red like a dead head of hair--the deaf tremble--reconnected at wave trouble marks a rock and some white fat--drunk in a minefield---careful

Up the ladder: no no no bad move
Down the ladder: can't you tell me?

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.75
Weighted score: 4.970199
Overall Rank: 8442
Posted: June 27, 2004 9:32 AM PDT; Last modified: June 27, 2004 9:32 AM PDT
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