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Free verse № 106686

Anger and the liver

Member since 2004 · Posted 27 Jun 2004 · 0 comments

i`m a bag of tainted meat-contaminated during processing open the vacuum drain fresh air and bacteria swarm deer jagged off target-fluids leak-the meats soured i`m going to catch them and breed them until theyre green now is when the ground takes you back still seedlings sleeping in the ground flies wings shells feathers-thanks for flying pan spermia-it`s never too far for us youre strapped to the bottom of a satellite and really looking down-now skipped beats too much interrupted rythm break freak the rhyme the tidal bulge in the scenery how this awful black drink fortifies--we`ve seperated from the continent rooting in an older world drinking oxidized red like a dead head of hair--the deaf tremble--reconnected at wave trouble marks a rock and some white fat--drunk in a minefield---careful

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