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SIMPLE (Free verse) by shazpen
the lights coming from beneath
hood strewn entrails of burden slushed in jet stains
all the steps of a mountain well down a dream marked her ass
oh god forever up and in the window
a tree trunk of a nerve
all cats dogs and possums
easy jumping paths through the clear air
swerving around dusty and solid
raised slaughtered cried every night-they move through and pull at your
reflexes
a lost day
lost to memory
only a resisdual that comes up in dreams and I can`t
remember if I dreamt it or it really happened or theres a
messenger from some other place warning the wrong dreamer about
unavoidable disaster
the striving shock panic and rage of an escape artist`s last performance
or the suicide of an obsessive in the headline of a man
awaiting execution
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Weighted score: 5.2086053
Overall Rank: 4481
Posted: June 26, 2004 8:16 AM PDT; Last modified: June 26, 2004 8:16 AM PDT
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