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The Little Girl (Free verse) by Torok
She kept the light in her bedroom a'burning, For fear that the dark should close in, Her hand cushioned her jaw, she was wishing The light, never to dim. She saw the light go! In his eyes Still, like stone As he lay On the ground A sudden truth that struck her cold! and though she wept, she never told.

Up the ladder: Daddy's Little Girl
Down the ladder: Diary

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.3333335
Weighted score: 5.1589375
Overall Rank: 5114
Posted: June 22, 2004 12:09 PM PDT; Last modified: June 22, 2004 12:09 PM PDT
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[9] MR Blobby @ 62.31.23.167 | 22-Jun-04/2:12 PM | Reply
BLOBBY BLOB 9/10
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