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When you taught me (Free verse) by donmiguel1960
When you taught me how to care
To be concerned, with lifeâs trial and error
Gasps of delight, now hastening throughout,
The barrenness of my spirit, now flourishing about
When you taught me gentleness, kindness, loving concern
Never what was spoken, only conscious motions to discern
Discovered qualities, pastures within, kindness Iâd never known,
Patients, understanding, unrealized heights, glories to which Iâve
grown
When you taught me who you saw, allowing me to be, the hero there
From where I rest, I could see my love, eager to allot, with out a care
Readily filled with desire, your needs grew to be my own
Enjoying the very person Iâve become, with purpose no longer alone
When you taught me the wonders of Love, boundless passions take wing
Suddenly I live with the contentment of a dove, now my very soul can
sing
For the joy of life has become your gift, forever to treasure, honor and
praise
Dedicating my life to returning this love, flowing from my heart, ready
to blaze
When you taught me how to cry, broken hearted, crushed, destroyed
Pouring sorrow as though I had die, reaching for emptiness, lost and
void
Awareness that the breathtaking qualities of life, I could never earn
One lesson of grief, that without you in my life, Iâve had to forever
learn
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Posted: June 18, 2004 12:53 PM PDT; Last modified: June 18, 2004 12:53 PM PDT
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