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New lover confirms poetic divorce (Haiku) by fevriere I can't bring myself
to rhyme the new blue eyes with
the sea this time.
Up the ladder:
The burlesque circus clown [revised]
Down the ladder:
Eclipsed Heart
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Posted: June 9, 2004 1:35 PM PDT; Last modified: June 9, 2004 1:35 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 7837 Comments:
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richa @ 81.178.253.120
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9-Jun-04/3:20 PM
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This haiku seems to suggest in happier times you could rhyme blue eyes with sea.
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fevriere @ 62.254.128.6
> richa
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11-Jun-04/3:47 AM
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Yes, yes!
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