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Haiku № 104688

New lover confirms poetic divorce

Member since 2004 · Posted 9 Jun 2004 · 2 comments

I can't bring myself to rhyme the new blue eyes with the sea this time.

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[n/a] richa 9-Jun-04/3:20 PM Reply
This haiku seems to suggest in happier times you could rhyme blue eyes with sea.
[n/a] fevriere › richa 11-Jun-04/3:47 AM Reply
Yes, yes!