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Free verse № 104061

Purest truth

Member since 2004 · Posted 3 Jun 2004 · 0 comments

I am drowning In a sea of my tears I am burning In an inferno of my fears I am bleeding From a hole in my stitched heart I am falling Slowly but surely apart I am hiding Behind all you have given me I am searching Even though I wander blindly I am wishing For a light at the end of the road I am running As my I watch my body erode I am forgeting What is fake and who is real I am lusting For anything that will make me feel I am speaking Words of the purest truth I am dieing Only to save you

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