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spiderweb (Free verse) by francis nor capule
i see you in the rain an unmovable monument to beauty perhaps it isn't raindrops on your face but tears with feelings of stone unyielding and unbending full control of every aspect never wavering of all the things i should have done perhaps the most important one was never to have fallen in your spiderweb trap

Up the ladder: Wondering
Down the ladder: real folk blues

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.2689414
Overall Rank: 3903
Posted: June 2, 2004 4:49 AM PDT; Last modified: June 2, 2004 4:49 AM PDT
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