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Making Sense in Plain Living (Free verse) by Flaithri
Give with joy in your heart In your spirit a sense of bliss Vibrant joy to the lonely Enduring affection for them who need you Waken hope of the bewildered heart Impressive touch in the senses The sense of life express by giving Happiness may be someone's sole desire Jubilate when you feel there's love in your heart Occupy your heart with a sincere love Your love can be a peerless gift to give Immeasurable love lights up one's life Never fake , love when felt is a magic Youth stage in life passed real love blooms timelessly to its fullest Okay is LOVE , so wonderful Understanding heart source of pure happiness Resembling GOD'S caring hands Healing wounds of the spirit Encouraging them to move forward Amid the noise and haste love go placidly Renewing , stronger , rejoicing Trusting the LORD , share a message.

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.375
Weighted score: 4.8319116
Overall Rank: 10809
Posted: August 21, 2002 4:39 AM PDT; Last modified: August 26, 2002 6:08 AM PDT
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Comments:
[2] Christof @ 195.172.133.226 | 21-Aug-02/6:34 AM | Reply
I didn't really understand the title and this sounds more like prose than poetry
[0] <~> @ 24.44.185.41 | 22-Aug-02/9:05 PM | Reply
not a gay slayer anymore?
[n/a] Flaithri @ | 23-Aug-02/3:50 AM | Reply
[n/a] Flaithri @ | 23-Aug-02/3:52 AM | Reply
Anyway I have change the title, I give a simple title to my poem . I think your right, it is a prose poem.
[0] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 26-Aug-02/7:27 AM | Reply
wow i am SO tired of seeing this poem crop up in the recent list, with a different user name each time.
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