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Making Sense in Plain Living (Free verse) by Flaithri

Give with joy in your heart In your spirit a sense of bliss Vibrant joy to the lonely Enduring affection for them who need you Waken hope of the bewildered heart Impressive touch in the senses The sense of life express by giving Happiness may be someone's sole desire Jubilate when you feel there's love in your heart Occupy your heart with a sincere love Your love can be a peerless gift to give Immeasurable love lights up one's life Never fake , love when felt is a magic Youth stage in life passed real love blooms timelessly to its fullest Okay is LOVE , so wonderful Understanding heart source of pure happiness Resembling GOD'S caring hands Healing wounds of the spirit Encouraging them to move forward Amid the noise and haste love go placidly Renewing , stronger , rejoicing Trusting the LORD , share a message.

Christof 21-Aug-02/6:34 AM
I didn't really understand the title and this sounds more like prose than poetry




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