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All Square (Other) by Enkidu
When the voice comes I will be asleep,tired of Religion we????????????????????????????????????????????Is all??????????????????????????????????????????wasted realize?????????????????????????????????????????On the???????????????????????????????????????????Our motive????????????????????????????????????????kind of????????????????????????????????????????????but man??????????????????????????????????????????who ,?????????????????????????????????????????????cares will??????????????????????????????????????????????if it????????????????????????????????????????????this reveal?????????????????????????????????????????one no?????????????????????????????????????????????life senseless???????????????????????????????????consumes Crimes breed criminals, to repent is holy, so what about me? ?

Down the ladder: Stuck in VI

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.2
Weighted score: 4.7854347
Overall Rank: 11266
Posted: May 14, 2004 7:43 AM PDT; Last modified: May 14, 2004 7:43 AM PDT
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[6] Sasha @ 69.138.236.63 | 14-May-04/11:57 AM | Reply
What in the name of......

I suppose this fits into the category of bad ascii art. I'm not sure though.

No matter how I read this, sideways, diagonally, top to bottom, bottom to top, circularly, or after after a few shots of smirnov, this still doesen't make much more sense than the pimple on my bum.

Maybe a few BableFish iterations will improve it.
[n/a] titan69 @ 62.31.24.124 > Sasha | 14-May-04/1:06 PM | Reply
this is a prime example of somone who dosent have a clue about
poem wrighting and conpleatly no imadgination
[0] Shardik @ 24.130.62.63 > Sasha | 15-May-04/3:33 PM | Reply
Perhaps it will fit in Uranus?
[0] Shardik @ 24.130.62.63 | 15-May-04/3:33 PM | Reply
A heaping spoonful of shit.
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