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All Square

Member since 2004 · Posted 14 May 2004 · 4 comments

When the voice comes I will be asleep,tired of Religion we????????????????????????????????????????????Is all??????????????????????????????????????????wasted realize?????????????????????????????????????????On the???????????????????????????????????????????Our motive????????????????????????????????????????kind of????????????????????????????????????????????but man??????????????????????????????????????????who ,?????????????????????????????????????????????cares will??????????????????????????????????????????????if it????????????????????????????????????????????this reveal?????????????????????????????????????????one no?????????????????????????????????????????????life senseless???????????????????????????????????consumes Crimes breed criminals, to repent is holy, so what about me? ?

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[6] Sasha 14-May-04/11:57 AM Reply
What in the name of......

I suppose this fits into the category of bad ascii art. I'm not sure though.

No matter how I read this, sideways, diagonally, top to bottom, bottom to top, circularly, or after after a few shots of smirnov, this still doesen't make much more sense than the pimple on my bum.

Maybe a few BableFish iterations will improve it.
[n/a] titan69 › Sasha 14-May-04/1:06 PM Reply
this is a prime example of somone who dosent have a clue about
poem wrighting and conpleatly no imadgination
[0] Shardik › Sasha 15-May-04/3:33 PM Reply
Perhaps it will fit in Uranus?
[0] Shardik 15-May-04/3:33 PM Reply
A heaping spoonful of shit.