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Me and My sense (Free verse) by Prince of Void The gapâ¦.cant be filled
Look down on me and my sense
Left behind to very far future
When the poem will be hollowed
Lost in the void of past
So then
No more carrying on
No more suffering on empty space
Vacuum â¦not existence
Keep forgetting me and my sense
No word can tryâ¦.
Ives of oblivion ...twilight of mine
Finally bury me in this very emptiness
So I only remain in the blankness of sense
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Posted: May 11, 2004 11:58 AM PDT; Last modified: May 11, 2004 11:58 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.119203 Overall Rank: 5697 Comments:
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zodiac @ 67.240.211.45
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12-May-04/6:16 AM
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You have absolutely no idea what you're talking about, do you?
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Prince of Void @ 217.218.131.135
> zodiac
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16-May-04/1:10 PM
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I have a poem ..created with my feelings that has seized within despair ...that brings the void ...im lost like those words can't be in one blank paper...that is that
YO DOWD.EXOLANT???
Yo in my surreal world ..i have never read such things ??? thank u for reading my chaotic poem ...
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