Me and My sense

Member since 2002 · Posted 11 May 2004 · 4 comments

The gapâ¦.cant be filled Look down on me and my sense Left behind to very far future When the poem will be hollowed Lost in the void of past So then No more carrying on No more suffering on empty space Vacuum â¦not existence Keep forgetting me and my sense No word can tryâ¦. Ives of oblivion ...twilight of mine Finally bury me in this very emptiness So I only remain in the blankness of sense

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[n/a] zodiac 12-May-04/6:16 AM Reply

You have absolutely no idea what you're talking about, do you?

[n/a] Prince of Void › zodiac 16-May-04/1:10 PM Reply

I have a poem ..created with my feelings that has seized within despair ...that brings the void ...im lost like those words can't be in one blank paper...that is that

[2] titan69 12-May-04/3:07 PM Reply

YO DOWD.EXOLANT???

[n/a] Prince of Void › titan69 16-May-04/1:19 PM Reply

Yo in my surreal world ..i have never read such things ??? thank u for reading my chaotic poem ...