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Reality (Free verse) by NeeMan
I have sacrificed my dreaming Immortalized some souls Stone cold Recklessly Afforded obscene amounts of passion Accordingly fucked style and fashion Ranting for a smaller goal I've exported all my magic Evacuated wisdom, wise Red faced Stupid Explained the wire-work of living Agreed on more take-and-giving Searching for a higher being In doing so I realized harshly That questioning can kill True beauty Innocence Concluded that I should accept The world and all that is defect Finding peace inside my soul

Up the ladder: Despair
Down the ladder: We Poor Rise

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7716
Posted: August 20, 2002 6:45 AM PDT; Last modified: August 20, 2002 6:45 AM PDT
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[10] Jezabele-In-Hell @ 66.209.81.134 | 24-Oct-04/11:30 PM | Reply
I like it!
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