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Free verse № 10087

Reality

Member since 2002 · Posted 20 Aug 2002 · 1 comment

I have sacrificed my dreaming Immortalized some souls Stone cold Recklessly Afforded obscene amounts of passion Accordingly fucked style and fashion Ranting for a smaller goal I've exported all my magic Evacuated wisdom, wise Red faced Stupid Explained the wire-work of living Agreed on more take-and-giving Searching for a higher being In doing so I realized harshly That questioning can kill True beauty Innocence Concluded that I should accept The world and all that is defect Finding peace inside my soul

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[10] Jezabele-In-Hell 24-Oct-04/11:30 PM Reply
I like it!