poemranker ::Weather by fevriere

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Free verse № 100724

Weather

Member since 2004 · Posted 6 May 2004 · 0 comments

Here, the elements are misread The streets are awash with petals Spring confetti dances The last trails of cloudy veils leave the sky Leaving nothing but the blues. Here the zodiac trips, mislead The breeze won't leave the trees Even after rain, the buds hope, and plead For sunlight. Here, painter illustrate what I hate: Weather only makes the seasons late.

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