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Weather (Free verse) by fevriere
Here, the elements are misread The streets are awash with petals Spring confetti dances The last trails of cloudy veils leave the sky Leaving nothing but the blues. Here the zodiac trips, mislead The breeze won't leave the trees Even after rain, the buds hope, and plead For sunlight. Here, painter illustrate what I hate: Weather only makes the seasons late.

Down the ladder: Maiden, Maiden

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7958
Posted: May 6, 2004 8:28 AM PDT; Last modified: May 6, 2004 8:28 AM PDT
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