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Giving up (Free verse) by hobojo Lost my footing
Somewhere on the trail
Full of jagged rocks
no way to prevail
Can not see a thing
Up here all alone
Climbing this mountain
No one left to phone
I've lost sight of the end
The path behind bleak
I'm left holding on
Increasingly more weak
What does one do
Time is of the essence
One must let go
To seek some progression
Up the ladder:
How rifted
Down the ladder:
how did i forget that i have to go to work?
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Posted: May 5, 2004 1:14 PM PDT; Last modified: May 5, 2004 1:14 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.029801 Overall Rank: 7332 250 view(s)
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