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Giving up (Free verse) by hobojo
Lost my footing
Somewhere on the trail
Full of jagged rocks
no way to prevail
Can not see a thing
Up here all alone
Climbing this mountain
No one left to phone
I've lost sight of the end
The path behind bleak
I'm left holding on
Increasingly more weak
What does one do
Time is of the essence
One must let go
To seek some progression
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.25
Weighted score: 5.029801
Overall Rank: 7322
Posted: May 5, 2004 1:14 PM PDT; Last modified: May 5, 2004 1:14 PM PDT
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