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20 most recent comments by dave78981 and replies
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Re: Pork by AEcutee1435 |
20-Aug-02/12:20 PM |
oh well done. expressive, well within the traditional 5-7-5 syllable structure of haiku, and evocative of the true nature of blah blah blah. is this a joke?
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Re: Loss by dave78981 |
20-Aug-02/4:31 AM |
it's not up to me to explain the poem's meaning... find your own meaning in it... besides, haiku is supposed to evoke a scene
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Re: On a Forgotten Riot, Washington, DC, 1990 by dave78981 |
19-Aug-02/8:48 PM |
that line refers to the clientele of the restaurant district where the riot took place. On second glance, without the background info, it could be a little confusing...
Thanks for the input!
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