regarding some deleted poem...	17-Apr-04/12:25 PM
Who the hell are you? Before I read ur translation, this was one of my favourite poems! Now this is my favourite translation of poetry period. Great Job!
Re: when do dreams fade? by francis nor capule	17-Apr-04/12:27 PM
seemz cliche. dunno why. maybe cause Ive read too many poems that say "life sucks"
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Apr-04/12:30 PM
This is just bad, but I'll give u a 2 for effort
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Apr-04/12:42 PM
First line would be better as "dark are the skies of spreading heaven"
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Apr-04/12:50 PM
you have just commited an unforgivable poetic sin! Rhyming "sad" with "mad" I'm giving a 3, since you at least had the kindness not to degenerate to "glad" and "bad"