Re: a comment on Nature by dreamsdiefirst |
18-Feb-04/9:57 PM |
U r sure a threat to Procter & gamble!
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Re: a comment on Insomnia by dreamsdiefirst |
17-Feb-04/10:29 AM |
Thanks for the help. I wil be striving to make haiku rhyme while keeping 5-7-5 form.
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Re: a comment on Insomnia by dreamsdiefirst |
15-Feb-04/11:22 PM |
English is not my native language so I have been struggling with both vocabulay and syllable count. Do you suggest any resource so I can catch-up?
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Re: a comment on Kusaku by dreamsdiefirst |
15-Feb-04/11:01 PM |
Thanks! Dont know the iota of Japanese. Had an idea to write this poem. Finally found words related to Haiku poems on a website and thus constructed this Haiku. Thanks for reviewing.
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Re: a comment on outSourcing by dreamsdiefirst |
15-Feb-04/10:47 PM |
This was infact a pun on American corporations which want to outsource everything to other countries and leaving their own countrymen and women jobless. I didn't mean to hurt any bodys feeling with this. I am sorry if you are offended. I am not an American but the "99.9% of people" that you have mentioned, dream baout living, loving and nurturing with "fat ignorant people" - I wonder why????????
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