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3-Sep-02/5:14 AM |
Amazing piece. Your metaphors are GREAT! "gathers men like clumps of fallen leaves"
PREFECT!!!
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Re: Angel by nightii |
5-Sep-02/6:51 PM |
no, no hidden intentions with the layout. It just seemed to feel best that way.
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7-Sep-02/8:35 AM |
I don't know what you're trying to say. I don't get it. Is there a point to this?
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7-Sep-02/5:38 PM |
Very poignant, and very powerful.
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Re: Don't Wanna Know by nightii |
7-Sep-02/5:41 PM |
Thank you Katie. It's meant to be a bit of a joke. AIDS is a serious subject, but I didn't mean for this poem to be taken seriously.
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Re: Don't Wanna Know by nightii |
7-Sep-02/6:37 PM |
Why do you stereotype? How do you know that I'm not a woman writing this to a man?
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Re: Don't Wanna Know by nightii |
7-Sep-02/6:58 PM |
yes, I am. and apparently you have a problem with men. my statement still stands. Why do you stereotype? This could just as easily havve been written by a woman. I know many women who look at men the same way you say men look at women.
This was meant as a joke. Why do I even bother arguing with you about it when you obviously don't get it. Not everything HAS to be serious, or socially acceptable.
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Re: Don't Wanna Know by nightii |
7-Sep-02/7:06 PM |
a "real masterpiece" in the "worst" section. that tells me quite a bit. I'm sorry if you have AIDS, but that has nothing to do with the quality of my poetry.
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Re: Losing Control by Tarquin De La Bog |
8-Sep-02/5:51 PM |
I feel as if I'm right there. This is very good.
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