| Re: a comment on I Go On by drumrgirl30 |
27-Jan-04/8:01 AM |
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as i have said before, this poem was written years ago..about how i once felt, but not anymore. I realize that this may not have been the best poem to present on this site, but whats done is done. I cant go back & re-do it. I thought the poem expressed that time in my life well, but obviously this was one that was meant to stay "for my eyes only". My thanks for your constructive critisism.
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| Re: a comment on Make Love to Me by drumrgirl30 |
27-Jan-04/6:30 AM |
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| Re: a comment on I Go On by drumrgirl30 |
27-Jan-04/6:27 AM |
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actually since my poetry seems to offend your delicate senses, its probably a good thing that i dont write very often. The 2 poem i have on here were written years ago. I only posted them to see what others might think. I knew there would be reviews such as yours & others. But since you dont believe that poetry is about thoughts or feelings, please enlighten me as to what poetry really is, in your opinion
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| Re: a comment on I Go On by drumrgirl30 |
27-Jan-04/6:21 AM |
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thank-you for your advise...however, if i did that it would not be MY poem anymore, but merely words taken from someone else. :)
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| Re: a comment on I Go On by drumrgirl30 |
26-Jan-04/6:40 PM |
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thank-you..i will look into it..as i am new to most poetry terms, it will take some time to find which type best suits my poetry.
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| Re: a comment on I Go On by drumrgirl30 |
26-Jan-04/6:36 PM |
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thank-you for the advice..i welcome it. Life is a forever learning process :)
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| Re: a comment on I Go On by drumrgirl30 |
26-Jan-04/6:34 PM |
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well..what is poetry if not a reflection of ourselves & our emotions?
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| Re: a comment on Make Love to Me by drumrgirl30 |
26-Jan-04/6:31 PM |
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nope..i dont look like an ape..i'm bald & have buck teeth...LOL (j/k)..thanks ;)
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| Re: a comment on Make Love to Me by drumrgirl30 |
26-Jan-04/8:30 AM |
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thank-you..now if only you had been my Lit. teacher when i was in school ;)
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| Re: a comment on Make Love to Me by drumrgirl30 |
26-Jan-04/8:29 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Make Love to Me by drumrgirl30 |
26-Jan-04/8:28 AM |
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no...but if you find it on one of her albums please let me know so i can contact her about royalties..lol
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