Re: guilty mind by Angel_of_fait	11-Nov-03/10:45 AM
I don't want to be harsh, but you've got a few serious spelling errors, and it's just not good form to use "u" instead of "you". I would suggest that you run this through spell checker, and... redo the formatting. The lines would flow better if you said "Lay your head on the bed, Sleep with the dead" instead of keeping that all one line. Granted, that's just my opinion, but I would consider doing those things and then reposting it.
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Nov-03/10:49 AM
It really didn't seem that creative to me: the language was uninspired and the rhyming was juvenile.
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Nov-03/10:58 AM
oh! *shivers* That was wonderful: very descriptive, and a nice little shock at the end for me. You've a beautiful command of language.
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Nov-03/11:02 AM
Oh, boy! Aside from tearing me between two emotions(sadness, because it's true, and laughter, because it was carried off so well), this was wonderful, and true.
Re: Styx by heartlessempath	17-Nov-03/5:03 AM
Thank you very much! I think that was one of my favorite lines too.