regarding some deleted poem...	17-Oct-03/9:36 AM
thanks for the comments... ok - i'll give ya the crenelated thing. but how do you know thunder has no taste - you can hear it, feel it, so whose to say you can't taste it? And if you could taste it - what do you think it might taste like? Also, if a bar is filled with smoke and I'm weightless like clouds and you saw through the haze of it all to see me - might I not appear a scepter?
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Oct-03/9:37 AM
I meant specter - mind the type-o's - it's friday and Elvis has already left the building...
regarding some deleted poem...	21-Oct-03/7:48 AM
excellent visuals, a soft sensual flow throughout..
Re: Autumn At All Saints Church by Caducus	23-Oct-03/10:07 AM
The beginning was excellent - great images and word play - but the last stanza just lost the feeling as a whole..