Re: Something I can't explain by milkymilk	28-Sep-03/9:51 PM
The flow of the poem is very good. i really enjoyed reading it
Re: Nightmares by openwounds	28-Sep-03/9:53 PM
i totally get the feeling you are conveying. there are some cliches like sheep, etc. but the poem is well composed
Re: Break Me by Freethinker1602	28-Sep-03/10:01 PM
definitely a good idea. it could be better but then again couldn't everything
Re: Involunarily yours, by jacqui	28-Sep-03/10:02 PM
how can you honestly give it one at least give me feedback