| Re: a comment on Class Life by lorigan85 |
17-Jul-03/8:27 AM |
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hey dude, thanks for your constructive criticism, serious, thats helpful. i wrote this listening to eminem music, and i suppose writing in the mood i was in was described precisely in your use of "jumble of raw emotion" cheers . ;)
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| Re: a comment on Class Life by lorigan85 |
17-Jul-03/5:39 AM |
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? listen guys im sorta in a bad mood, feeling abit jaded im sure u've had the feeling..about school, life, and the HSC. But i wasnt expecting someone to go "that was horrible" , aint no confidence boosters to anyone..so yeh sorry if i sound like a bitch i just thought it might make sense even to 1 other person.
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| Re: Goodbye by Sunshine Conkey |
17-Jul-03/1:05 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Class Life by lorigan85 |
17-Jul-03/1:03 AM |
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that was horrible? wheres the constructive criticism? jesus how can someones feelings be so 'fucking horrible' an 11 out of what 100? gee dude if u feel that way keep ur opinions out of it. not everyone is pros. i just started writing and i aint making no excuses neither cos i enjoy it and i think thats what poetry is all about, so the bottom line is shut the fuck up, ok?
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