on some deleted poem
14 Jul 2003, 4:36 PM
hmm, paled in comparison to "always", nevertheless, a good piece.. <6>
on SILENT ECHOES by Tahlia
14 Jul 2003, 4:18 PM
nice.. it's easy to see its beauty in its simplicity.. <8>
on some deleted poem
14 Jul 2003, 4:28 PM
hmm, though quite a common theme, wonderfully expressed.. it's like a solitary blue rose in a garden of red ones; though still a rose, it manages to stand out.. <8>
on some deleted poem
14 Jul 2003, 4:33 PM
hey, i never quite liked the whole "jagged" form of poetry, but this piece certainly made me think twice of that stand.. well done.. <8>
on some deleted poem
14 Jul 2003, 4:23 PM
hey, i really like this piece.. flowing nicely, wonderfully presented.. <9>