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Re: ~haiku~ by Entelechist 9-Dec-03/1:23 AM
Hi Richa,
Thanks for making a comment on this Haiku. I agree with you that a haiku has to be self-explanatory to work, so I won't try and explain the last line. Glad you got some inkling of the sentiments behind it.
Happy scribbling.
Re: a comment on <Haiku> by Entelechist 27-May-03/3:47 PM
Dark_Angel you belie you moniker. I like this, but the middle line lacks movement which single words
convey......but this is a minor point. Great stuff.


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