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Re: moon rants by bluwiz 15-Jul-02/8:38 PM
Cute. But it ain't poetry. It's prose.
Re: Sophisticant by Bluesee 15-Jul-02/12:58 PM
It's not a typo. :)
Re: Vespers and Cobwebs by Bluesee 15-Jul-02/11:28 AM
Thanks for reading and critiquing my first submittal...

I don't really have any formal training. What is scan? And I suppose that I could shorten it, but I have always cast off considerations of meter and 'rules', and focussed on the process of incubation, contemplation, inspiration and then determination. You know, lock the doors, light a candle, and then see what it becomes. Maybe I could consider editing it, but somehow the process of editing is revisionist to me. Oy!

Thanks again for your honest input. Maybe this site can help make me a better writer


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